Score: 7

"Short and to the point."

submission: Executed

date: October 4, 2007

Oh i will waste my time kind sir! Any ways, art was defiantly past its time but the animation was simplistic. I like the idea of the movie but i felt like it could have been portrayed with more violence, i mean hey this is Newgrounds. I enjoyed how the credits popped up in the middle of the movie it added an element of humor. Overall well done.

~Dna

Score: 8

"HAHA !"

submission: Kill-A-Baby: Uncut

date: October 4, 2007

Well done, short violent and offensive. This defiantly gets the NG stamp of approval. As fucked up as it sounds i suggest you vary the way in which you can kill the babies. Improved graphics and animations would also be a plus. CORN!

~Dna

Score: 6

"Deent."

submission: LOUD JUNK

date: October 4, 2007

I am a big fan of South Park and this is a decent spoof. It seems as if you remade the characters and the background yourself and if so very well done. The graphics although not great are very smiler to the show. Their could have been more advanced animation and the movie seemed to drag on for a while. The mouths were not synced well with the voices and their is even one point where a mouth is moving and nothing is happening. I would try to make it get to the point faster next time. Also the audio was below par, i feel like you should have created\ used a better song and got some one else to do your voice acting for you. The voices were irritating. Overall its a mediocre job.

~Dna

Score: 4

"Kind of creepy."

submission: Eater of Houses

date: October 4, 2007

Creepy and somewhat abstract. The animation [especially the lip sync] could use some work as well as the graphics. Add more details to different items like the faces, the clothing etc. Simple off color shading should do the trick. The audio fit the movie it was creepy. The story was ok but more blood and gore would have been nice. The idea is good but the animation/ graphic ability needs more work, something other then simple tweens will do the trick.

~Dna

Score: 6

"Good graphics. Needs a more violent approach."

submission: Barney Vibe

date: October 4, 2007

The graphics were good the shading and the detail was right where it was supposed to be. The animation could have been better it was almost nonexistent with the exception of the fireball thing and the vibrator toss. The idea was funny, who doesn't like to kill Barney? The inclusion of a more intricate background would have gone a long way and the joke could have been presented differently. Fast and violent is the key.

Score: 8

"Well done."

submission: Scorpio Mercenary Group

date: October 4, 2007

Graphics and animation were well above where they needed to be for the time. The detail in the characters was almost flawless. The storyline was good and i saw no problems with the audio. If i had to make suggestions for improvement it would be to make the buttons look better by adding more color and effects and to make the text more legible. Also you could have the buttons remain in the same place frame after frame so the viewer doesn't have to move the mouse every time they are done reading. Good job over all, very advanced for 7 years old.

~Dna

Score: 2

"Funny beginninng. Lacked direction."

submission: Superman

date: October 4, 2007

The majority of the submissions content was not produced from scratch rather it was just different pictures that were manipulated so i cant say the graphics were good. The animation was below where it should be, simple motion tweens seemed to constitute the basis of this movies animation. I think you need to try making more of your own pictures, make the animation Fbf as well as tweens and also have a more developed storyline. I don't see much humor in switching the heads of lady liberty and a sphinx.

~Dna

Score: 3

"Could be better. Unique idea."

submission: Monopolized

date: October 4, 2007

The idea of the movie was good and the character selection was unique. The graphics and the animation are average nothing special. The tweens are primitive and constituted the entire animation they were too slow to look somewhat realistic. Less frames between tweened key frames would make make for increased realism in the movements. The voices were annoying, try using some one else to do your voice acting for you. Also i felt like the blood at the end should have been red, it would have added a good contrast to the black and white submission.

~Dna

Score: 3

"Average."

submission: Koke Inferno

date: October 4, 2007

Much better then some of the trash that i have seen pass through judgment recently. I think this kind of movie just wasn't my cup of tea [or koke]. Their was not much animation small variations in different frames gave the illusion of movement. Maybe this is too old for me to understand but i didn't grasp the concept of the video. The audio was good but like already mentioned didn't sync with the visual.

~Dna

Score: 8

"Quick and funny."

submission: Myce

date: October 4, 2007

It was good for a quick laugh. Although the animation and graphics weren't perfect it really wasn't necessary for a submission of this nature. The audio paired with the funny text made for a really funny submission. I enjoyed it.

~Dna